Editor 1:  Unconventional and interesting twist on Santa stories.  Quite striking narrative at times, almost hallucenogenic, more coherent where it leans toward the conventional as in the scene with the mute Eskimo, however, the whole is not pulled together, the writing is rather adverb-heavy, the characters disjointed, the scenes fractured, and in the end, I didn't see the point of it.  

Editor 2: My favorite line - "Fuck Budweiser."